Saturday, December 22, 2012

Haunted Hotel

Not for people that have a fear of spiders!!!! Or do not read at night!!!




Looking up at the colorful sunset, i continue walking down the same trail for what seemed like hours. looking to the side of the road, to only see a hotel, a small broken one, the H from the word was missing, and street lights flickered, i decided to bunker down for the night. I go in, to see a normal room, i go up to the desk and ring the small bell, a tall dark man with white gloves goes up and puts his hand on the desk, he seemed tense, i could clearly see the clothing now. a black tux, quite common here. his grayish eyes flickered in the dim light, he said in a deep tone "evening ma'am, my name is Jeff, how may i help you?" i looked dead into his eyes completely stunned at the tone of his voice. Stuttering i said "I'm looking for a room for the night.."  Jeff relaxed his body, his eyes going from anger to..something i couldn't read...Jeff lifted his hand off the table and  reached for some keys under the table. Pulling out a pair of rusted keys."room 5," confused, i asked "no payment?" he replied, "your our first customer here in a while, so its free of charge.." Nodding in agreement. i head upstairs to my room, opening  the door, i was stunned, it seemed so neat, and clean, i wondered how they kept this room clean but not the whole hotel..setting my bag on the floor, i go to the bathroom, and turn on the shower, no water came out, i turned the hot water all the way up, that's when it turned on. Thinking the water would be scorching, i turned it off.i go to the mirror and start to brush my hair. Looking back into my reflection, i notice a small child in the background  i turned quickly to see if the child was there...but it wasn't. Spooked by the appearance, i head to bed, i wrap myself in the blankets and turn off the lamp. Feeling something as it crawled up my leg, i hop out of bed, to see...spiders. hairy, beady eyed spiders. turning on the lamp, it was 10:30 AM. Freaking out i ran to the bathroom. putting both my heads on the sink. (i mean, who doesn't like spiders?) looking into the foggy, cracked mirror the little girl in it was closer to me than last time, i turn around to see nothing, back again, she was closer, i could see her clearly this time, a white dress, void black hair, pitch black eyes, and a sewn mouth. (it seemed like a sea blue first glance). a red tear rolled down her cheek as the whole room went black, looking away from the mirror, remembering i let the flashlight on the table near the bed. After crashing into a few walls and tripping over a number things, i reached the flashlight, i grabbed it and turned it on, i felt like i was in the game Slender.I ran outside in the moon lit sky, and down to the lobby, no one was there, figuring Jeff went home.Grabbing the nearest newspaper off a wooden table, i started to read the headline.. "Hotel was burned in horrible fire, the people killed was Jeff Steven, Sally timers, and Jessica fillips, the date was 12/30/1990." Dropping the newspaper, starting to panic, talking to myself "my name is....Jessica fillips though..." everything went black, for a second, a weird feeling tingled inside me, a soft echo bellowed though the empty lobby, repeating this"A women swallowed a spider, it wiggled and jiggled and tickled inside her..." a evil Laugh followed the child's voice.images raced through my mind of the blazeing fire that consumed this place afterward... A digital clock fell off the counter and hung upside down catching my attention, it was 11:34, but upside down........ it said HELL..... Looking up at the colorful sunset, i continue walking down the same trail for what seemed like hours




                                         

1 comment:

  1. great start baby .. I know you will grow and become a great writer one day. Just take in everything you here from Writers who have been through it all.

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